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So my cell phone plan recently expired,and I got a blackberry with internet access. I'm posting right now from a goodwill! I was skeptical before but now I love it!

So, I'm at about 2500 words, and I expect to get to about 10,000. I'm trying to finish it before going back to school in late August. My girlfriend is going to edit it for me, and if I like it I guess I'll try to get it published. Anyways, it's about a guy who wakes up from cryogenic storage in a spaceship that's full of nasty creatures with no memory of what's going on...

Hey wait, it gets better, I promise!

Anyways, does anybody whose a little more experienced in the writing department have any suggestions? Also, when it's done I can send it to you guys individually over email or pms or whatever, I just don't want to post it directly to these boards, since if it gets published that would piss them off.

Hey I know I've been gone a while, but it's sad not seeing everyone around here that I was used to seeing. What happened to all the regular posters? Did real life start getting in the way of all of the digital shenanigans we used to take part in, because I remember some great stuff in the glory days of this forum. Ah, good memories.

Edit: Sigh, I just took a look at at least two dozen people's profiles, and most haven't signed on in months, some in years. Kind of depressing really.

Don't mind me, just posting some of the best freak outs to ever grace youtube.

http://www.youtube.c... h?v=YersIyzsOpc

http://www.youtube.c... h?v=7Sq-HYGfnIo

http://www.youtube.c... feature=related

Oh man, the kid's voice in this one is hilarious.

http://www.youtube.c... h?v=Q3a-ajsVVus

Anybody seen this fantastic episode of Robot Chicken? They also have a part 2, which is equally excellent.