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Posted 10 September 2005 - 06:53 PM

Okay, I know this has been done so many times that is just annoying, but my prequels are different and I want you to read them.

Episode I:

Birth of a Hero

(Crappy name, but I just don't have ideas for it now.)


Anakin was a 19-year old man that lived with his parents in a city in a planet named Utapau. His life was pretty boring because he always had to work in his parents farm. He was a very kind man that always wanted to help and his dream was to one day become a Jedi Knight, but his dreams were always crushed by his dad because he said that he had no chance to become a Jedi.

The only thing that Anakin liked of Utapau was his girlfriend called Bastilla. (Padme is just a boring name and Bastilla rocks) Anakin and Bastilla began their relation ship when they were both 15 and Anakin tought it was time to finally pop the question. Anakin finally popped the question in a restaraunt and Bastilla gladly accepted. Anakin that moment tought that that day couldn't be better.

That same day, Anakin heard on the news that the Clone Wars were getting more brutal every day and that the Dark Lord Palpatine was conquering planets in the Outer Rim, were Utapau was and that he was heading there.

The evacuation for the city were Anakin lived began immediately after the news, but it was too late. The Clones entered the planet and began to detroy the city with their ships. Troops came out of the ships and began to kill and kidnap people. Anakin tried to find Bastilla, but he then saw her being captured. Anakin stood there shocked until some troops began to chase him. He escaped and ran into an alley. He knew he was he was doomed.

I'll continue the story later. I like cliffhangers. smile.gif
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Posted 10 September 2005 - 07:43 PM

New title.

Rise of the Jedi.

And don't imagine Utapau as the planet in Episode III. Imagine it as Tatooine with futuristic buildings.

And also don't imagine it with crappy CGI. Imagine it with special effects of the OT. The Invasion of Utapua is kinda like the invasion of Hoth to me but with sand.
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Posted 11 September 2005 - 12:01 PM

This is better than the Phantom Menace.
Are you going to cut Jar Jar Binks, right?
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Posted 11 September 2005 - 03:47 PM

Thanks, Ewok.

And I'm not going to cut Jar Jar! devil.gif
(Hell, of course I'm going to cut him.)


Time to continue:

When Anakin tought that all was lost, he saw some ships landing on the city. Those were Rebel ships. The Rebel ships landed and began to battle the Clones. Anakin was watching that battle when he was sorrounded by some clones. When he tought he was going to die, General Obi-Wan Kenobi appeared and killed them.

After the battle, Obi-Wan decide to take Anakin to his home. When they got there, Anakin saw his house destroyed and the corpses of their parents on the ground (Sounds familiar, right?). Obi-Wan then took the devastated Anakin to the mothership.

Anakin asked Obi-Wan to be his Jedi apprentice so he could stop the Cloners from taking over the galaxy. Obi-Wan feeling sad for Anakin, decide to make him some tests of agility and you know, more stuff. After watching his great power with the Force, he decided to choose him as his apprentice.

The Clones Mothership was in the other side of the planet. Palpatine held all his hostages there. Anakin knew Bastilla was there so hetold Obi-Wan that it was time to rescue all the hostages.

Stay tuned! Same bat-topic, same bat-time!
(Well, maybe not same bat-time, I guess.)
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Posted 11 September 2005 - 05:58 PM

sad.gif Are going tu cut Qui-Gon and Darth Maul?
But, please cut the midichlorians
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Posted 11 September 2005 - 08:29 PM

Qui-Gon will maybe appear, but he is going to be another Jedi. Not the Master of Obi-Wan.

And I'll cut Darth Maul. But Palpatine in my prequels is young and has Maul's agility. And he's an human looking-alien, not a human that had his face disfigured.
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Posted 14 September 2005 - 05:11 PM

And does Palpatine has a double saber?
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