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Posted 16 February 2004 - 07:49 AM

Post any comments you have regarding the stories in "Storytime" here, the actual thread is starting to get kind of cluttered in spots.

Anyway, Reader, that was a great ending. So touching and dramatic. Truly, we have completed a work of epic proportions.
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Posted 16 February 2004 - 11:13 PM

I just started in that story thing...

It's ok, but I probably would never read it. wink.gif
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Posted 16 February 2004 - 11:57 PM

I'll probably read it all tonight. thanks for the propers! I was thinking of Jesus the entire time.

Maybe someone can compile the whole thing and submit it to some amateur short story paper, or one of those papers that welcome experimental pieces. Or neither - i just want to see it as a straight narrative.
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Posted 17 February 2004 - 07:37 AM

If/when I get time, I might go through, compile it all into one file, and see what comes out.
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Posted 17 February 2004 - 11:06 AM

It is a rather nice ending. Thanks for keeping the story going smoothly while I was gone. You're all very close to my heart.

Except for you, Reader.

No, wait... even you.
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Posted 18 February 2004 - 10:06 PM

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Posted 19 February 2004 - 12:09 AM

QUOTE (Ninja Duck @ Feb 17 2004, 11:06 AM)
It is a rather nice ending. Thanks for keeping the story going smoothly while I was gone. You're all very close to my heart.

Except for you, Reader.

No, wait... even you.

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i don't know what i did to deserve that, but whatever it is, i'm genuinely sorry.
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Posted 19 February 2004 - 05:43 PM

QUOTE (Reader @ Feb 16 2004, 11:57 PM)
Maybe someone can compile the whole thing and submit it to some amateur short story paper, or one of those papers that welcome experimental pieces. Or neither - i just want to see it as a straight narrative.

Myself and 11 other friends are beginning an experimental story in the near future. The way it's going to work is that we will have someone write a first chapter. Once this is complete we will then split into two groups of 6. Each group takes the opening chapter and from their we draw lots on the order in which we write. The first writer reads the first chapter and then writes the second. The second writer reads only the second chapter and then writes the third. This continues through all six writers and we run through 4 rounds to make a total of 25 chapters. At the end we then see how the two novels differed from what was presented in the first chapter.

Some of the people involved have already completed one book with only six writers. I haven't read it yet, but apparently it worked out quite well.

At th very least it's something to do in my spare time. biggrin.gif
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Posted 23 February 2004 - 05:06 PM

Sounds delectable.
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