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Posted 04 May 2005 - 07:37 PM

Star Wars
Episode II
The Galaxy Divided

In a galaxy far far away…

(OPENING CRAWL)

The Clone Wars are still raging on, and the galaxy is in turmoil. Star systems begin to discontinue their membership to the Galactic Republic, swelling the size of the Union of Separatist Revolutionists.

Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker begins a mission to help the Republic destroy the base and headquarters of the corrupt Federation.

The darkside of the force grows stronger, and the threat of the Sith looms like a shadow over the fate of all.

Ext: Space: Geonosh
A space capsule, of small size, flies towards Geonosh.

Ext: Geonosh: Day

The rocky, sandy, desert terrain of Geonosh heats up in the rays of the sun. It is about 115 degrees. A gray lizard scampers up a slope, towards the edge of a cliff. It’s tongue flicks out to taste the particles of dust drifting in the air. It scampers high, climbing over large coulders. Finally, it comes up to the edge of the cliff. The cliff is very high, and down below is a huge stretch of desert flatlands. The flatlands are usually empty… but now it is a battlefielf, having thousands of soldiers and droids on it.

Ext: Geonosh: Battlefield 3a: Day

Countless blaster bolts fly through the air. Clonetroopers hold large heavy-duty blasters, aiming them at the Republic soldiers. Battle droids wield ray-guns, and destroyer droids roll across the battlefield, stopping every so often to use their built-in blasters. Bodies from both sides lay dead or destroyed on the ground, being trampled on by those still in action. Republic soldiers, now slightly outnumbered by the opposing forces of the enemy, fight for all their worth.

Int: Geonosh: Republic Miltia Outpost: Day

Built in to the side of a steep cliff, on a small mountain, is the Rep. Mil. Outpost.

COMMANDER SMERT – Will we need to send more forces to battlefield 3a?

OFFICER ON COMPUTER – Yes sir, the scanning droids have sent us data, that our forces are dropping significantly.

COMM. SMERT – Send another squad out. That should balance the scales for another hour.

Ext: Geonosh: Battlefield 3a: Day

Missile tanks belonging to the clonetroopers, rise up over a hill, floating several feet above the ground. Following behind each tank, is a long line of troopers. Many jump onto the tanks and man the small gunning-pods attached to the sides. They rampage through the battlefield, firing in the direction of the Republic army. Explosions of massive size are created when one of the missils hit solid ground, sending body parts and shards of metal flying in all directions. In a crevice beside a large rock, overlooking the battle below, several fresh soldiers climb out, weapons at ready.

Int: Geonosh: Rep. Mil. Outpost

An officer walks to a man stationed at a map on a navigation screen.

OFFICER – What are those strange shapes on the screen?

NAVIGATOR – Enemy forces have sent in missile tanks.

OFFICER – Commander Smert informed me, that if more vehicles were sent in, to answer it by sending yet another squad.

NAVIGATOR – But we’re running out of men!

OFFICER – That is not your job to decide that. Send an alert to the underground armory. Tell them to send more men.

Ext: Geonosh: Day

The space capsule falls through the atmosphere of Geonosh, and soon lands on it’s surface, with a large thud. The capsule opens up, and a man dressed in tattered brown robes steps out. It is Anakin Skywalker, Jedi Knight. Looking in the distance, he can see the Federation Base. It is the home of the syndicate that used to fund and supply the Separatist and Republic armies. But now, it only funds the Separatists. Anakin walks towards the base, mentally preparing himself for the great battle to come.

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Posted 04 May 2005 - 07:48 PM

Ext: Geonosh: Outside Federation HQ Base: Day

The Federation Base stands tall, wide, and overall, takes up the space of a square mile. It is made of extremely hard, red stone. At the top of the base, at it's four corners, are watch-towers, equipped with heavy blaster cannons. Sitting in the seats that are behind the guns, are battledroids. The base stands 1/4 of a mile tall, and along the walls, ever 200 yards, is a clone stationed with a blaster, waiting to shoot down intruders. The Fed. Base is heavily guarded, along with the one-way, invisible energy field surrounding it. Chances were small that the opposing soldiers could break through the energy field. Someone would have to find the energy field's power unit, that ran an underground cord to the base, powering it, with it's energy. The power unit could be anywhere on the planet.
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Posted 04 May 2005 - 07:58 PM

Ext: Battlefield 3a: Geonosh

The Republic forces move by thousands towards the Federation Base. Behind the Rep. army, are AT-TEs (All Terrain Tactical Enforcers). An AT-TE's six articulated legs move quickly, as to keep up with the army it is helping. Large blasts issue from the main cannon at the top, and from the four ball-turret laser cannons attached to the front. Alongside the groups of AT-TEs, are SPHA-Ts (Self-propelled Heavy Artillary-Turbolaser), which are much larger than the AT-TEs. Their central cannon at the top, rotates to the east and west, firing towards the enemies ahead. Every SPHA-T has either an artillery-destruct gun or laser blast cannon attached to the modular at the top. Likewise, helping the Separatist army, are hundreds of STAPs (Single Trooper Aerial Platform). On them, are battle droids. They fly behind, ahead, and through the army of their ally clones, who they themselves fight with great skill. Republic Attack Gunships fly in the air above the mighty battle, dropping off AT-TEs that are attached to their belly surfaces by mechanical claws.

Little by little, the Rep. army makes it's way through the masses of clones and droids, towards the Fed. Base, which is sending in more forces to the battlefield to hold the pursuers at bay.
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Posted 04 May 2005 - 08:04 PM

Ext: Geodosh: Outside Federation Base: Day

Clones march out of the main portal leading out from the base, and through the one-way energy field.

Ext: 15 miles away: Geodosh: Day

Anakin runs at a sprint, panting. He has been running for an hour, and has not paused at any point to take a break. Ahead, is the power unit to the energy field. Back at his spaced capsule, he had scanned a 50 mile radius for power generators producing great amounts of energy. Finally, after much waiting, he had detected the power unit with his scanning computer.

When reaching it, Anakin sees that it is a large metal cube, cords and extensions dug deep into the side of the cliff it is next to. Obviously, the extensions are 15 miles long, and reach all the way to the Fed. Base.

Taking out his lightsaber, the Jedi Knight ignites the shining blue blade. He slashes down at the extensions, slicing them in half.
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Posted 04 May 2005 - 08:14 PM

Ext: Geonosh: Outside Fed. Base: Day

The energy field is down, and Rep. Soldiers, along with the tank walkers, flood into the area. The battle droids at the blaster cannons at the corners of the base, begin aiming and shooting down as many invaders as possible. A group of SPHA-Ts surround the base, all of them 80 meters away. In one series of blasts, they fire at the base. The impact and number of blasts, along with the strength of the blasting bolts, sends several layers of the thick outer walls, crumbling down. This makes the clones and droids stationed at the top to be blown to pieces, or sends them falling to their deaths. The last of the clone and droid forces emerge from the base, trying in a last stand to defend the Federation.
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Posted 04 May 2005 - 08:20 PM

Ext: Alderaan: Night

The lights in the Alderaanian Senate House are all shut off, except for the light in one room, which is the room of Senator Palpatine.

Int: Alderaan: S.H. : Palpatine's Room: Night

Palpatine lies in his bed, his face pale, and his eyes sunken. Nera sits in a chair beside the bed.

PALPATINE - When I go, I want you to be a Senator of Alderaan, Nera. Bail Organa will make a fine partner, I assure you.

NERA - Don't talk in such a manner. You'll be fine... you're just ill...

Nera reaches and takes Palpatine's thin hand in hers.

PALPATINE - There is no need to tell falsehoods to yourself. I have been ill for a few months now... even the medical droid calculates that I will die soon.

Bail Organa walks into the room, also taking a seat next to the bed.

Int: Alderaan: S.H.: Morning

Morning comes. A medical droid walks into Nera's sleeping quarters , waking her. The droid says something to her. She gasps and puts her face in her hands, crying.
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Posted 04 May 2005 - 08:51 PM

Ext: Outer Space: Anakin's X-Wing

Anakin’s X-Wing flies slowly through space, in the direction of Alderaan. The destruction of the Federation's base was successful. Yet, it was devastating, because hundreds of thousands of Republic Soldiers were killed. The clones outnumbered the soldiers, 10-1. Not to mention the number of battle and destroyer droids. But the walker tanks had evened the odds after days of fighting.

Anakin himself had ran to the base and helped destroy it. He was exhausted.

Anakin sits back painfully, closing his eyes for rest. He had spent 3 1/2 years fighting in the Clone Wars; once every few months, he would go and visit Nera. The war had made him weary and mentally older than he truly was. And something new added to his sorrow: Anakin had just received news from Alderaan, that Senator Palpatine had died.


Ext: Alderaan: Day

Anakin lands his X-Wing in a forest clearing near Nera's home.

Her home is small, but well designed. She owns R4, the astrodroid whom Anakin gave to her a couple of years back. A few others droids live with her to tend the garden, clean the home, and other misc. tasks. Nera has had her personal home for a year, having completed her political studies under Senator Palpatine.

They sit in her small kitchen, sharing a glass of wine.

ANAKIN - You sure you will be alright?

NERA - I will be, Anakin. Don't worry about me. Please.

ANAKIN - That is hard. Almost impossible.

She gives a fake smile, to cover her sadness.

Anakin reaches out and gently runs his fingers through Nera's hair. Nera takes the glass of wine and puts it to Anakin's lips. He closes his eyes and leans his head back, the sweet wine flowing into his mouth. Nera takes the glass from his lips, and sets it on the table. Anakin swallows and takes a deep breath.

NERA - You look tired.

ANAKIN - I haven't slept in days. These past few hours... have had a dreamlike quality.

NERA - Go ahead and go to bed. I have work to do around the home anyway.

They get up, embracing each other in a hug.

ANAKIN - Palpatine was a good man. His legacy will live on through you, I promise.

NERA - Yeah...

Anakin walks into Nera's bedroom and collapses on her bed, immediately falling to sleep.
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Posted 04 May 2005 - 09:31 PM

Int: Nera's Home: Morning

Nera stands in front of the image reflector (mirror) in her bedroom. Anakin stands behind her, helping her tie the back of her dress.

NERA - Do you like this dress, Anakin? Do I look good in it?

ANAKIN - (smiling) You look seductive in it. Stop worrying. You're attractive no matter what.

She turns around and faces him. They had spent the whole morning preparing for the Inauguration Ball, that is taking place in the Alderaanian Palace. The palace is used for all the celebrations on the planet.

NERA - I'm nervous.

ANAKIN - There is really no need to be. You will be a great Senator.

Int: Alderaanian Palace: Night

Tables and chairs are filled in the dining hall. The inauguration has taken place, and Alderaan now has a new Senator. People of many races, most being humanoids, are gathered in celebration.

The walls of the palace, along with the ceilings and floors, are made of white marble. Escalators, made of shining metal, carry people up and down, either to the main hall, or the many floors and chambers above. The palace is lit by glowing lights in the centers of the ceilings.

Viceroy Bail Organa, Senator Nera, and Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker, sit together at one of the long tables. Their plates are filled with food, and their glasses are filled with quality spirits.

ANAKIN - So, Bail. Is Obi-Wan still fighting in the military unit that you finance?

BAIL - Yes, but like you, he is on a break.

ANAKIN - Where is he?

BAIL - (shrugs) Tatooine, I'm guessing. Enjoys visiting his home planet.

ANAKIN - That's what he was doing when he took me as his apprentice all those years ago.

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Posted 04 May 2005 - 09:42 PM

Int: Palace Dance Hall: Night

The dance hall is decorated with colorful tapestries and ornaments. Many dance around with partners, going around in circles, the ladies' dresses flapping out in spirals as they spin. Bail Organa dances with his wife, Glohfa Organa.

Anakin and Nera get up and go to the Dance Hall. A slow song comes from the alien band playing in the corner. The notes are soft, tantalizing, and mystical. They stare into each other's eyes. As the tune slows down into a new melody of flutes, their faces come closer, and Nera closes her eyes.

Anakin pauses, blinking. Suddenly, he grabs Nera's shoulders and they fall to the ground. Anakin breaks Nera's fall, but rolls on top of her quickly.

ANAKIN - EVERYONE TAKE COVER!

There is a large explosion from the Main Hall, and the palace shakes, sending the ceiling falling towards the crowds below. Dust rises from the crash, as blood-curdling screams come from people that were smashed our wounded by the fallen ceiling. There is another explosion, several floors of the palace collapsing.

Everything grows silent. Anakin gets up, helping Nera to her feet. Half the palace is destroyed, and the night sky outside can be seen where the north wall once stood. Hands, arms, and heads of dead bodies poke out from the chunks of white marble that fell. Many survived, however, including Bail Organa and his wife.

BAIL - Anakin! We must escort everyone into the forest, until everything is clear!

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Posted 05 May 2005 - 01:29 AM

Again... considerably different.

You pulled off a good surprise there... a much better way of convincingly depicting Palpatine's rise to power than 'he sat on the inside the whole time and had communications with all his apprentices and servants on the outside and no one noticed him'...
Your writing style has improved somewhat around the descriptive passages of events, though the dialogue still needs tempering and flow...

What kind of time separation is Galaxy Divided from Clone Wars?
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Posted 05 May 2005 - 07:03 AM

3 years. Hey, thanks. Glad to know I am improving. Hard to notice unless someone notices it for you. I'm happy that I am improving.
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Posted 05 May 2005 - 04:49 PM

Ext: Outside of Nera's Home: Night

Anakin walks wearily in the direction of Nera's home. He stops in his tracks... the home has been destroyed. The several guards following him wait for orders.

GUARD #1 - Sir, what should we do?

Anakin doesn't answer, but stands, glaring at the piles of charred ashes. An exp​ression of deepest loathing slides across his face.

ANAKIN - (speaking to himself) At least R4 came with us to the ball... wish I could say the same for the other droids.

GUARD #1 - Sir?

ANAKIN - What? (indifferently)

GUARD #1 - Sir, would you like us to go through the wreckage and search for unharmed items?

Anakin turns upon the guard, a frown on his face.

ANAKIN - Sure, you go ahead and do that. The other guards and I are going to the Senate House.

The guard stands, confused.

Anakin walks to him, taking the guard by the collar and lifting him from his feet.

ANAKIN - SEARCH THROUGH THE DAMNED WRECKAGE!

Anakin throws the guard to the ground, walking away, motioning for the other guards to follow him.

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Posted 05 May 2005 - 05:02 PM

Ext: Main Port City of Alderaan: Day

Many floating vehicles zoom by, all of them barely missing each other. Small buildings stand on either side of the rugged street. A robed figure walks down the side of the street, bent down, shadow cast over his face. Beside the figure, is a man that blends in well with the people bustling about.

The robed figure is Anakin Skywalker, and the man is Bail Organa.

BAIL - I assure you, she will be safe in the underground rooms of the Senate House.

ANAKIN - Good.

BAIL - This attack is devastating. Along with the death of Palpatine, these past few days have been dark.

ANAKIN - We are also in the middle of the Clone Wars. Its only expected.

BAIL -Where exactly are you going?

ANAKIN - To Roon. My lightsaber was in Nera's home when it was destroyed. I must go make a new one.

They stop beside a small spaceship, piloted by a thin, white droid.

BAIL - Good luck, Anakin.

ANAKIN - I don't believe in luck, Bail. Only in the force... and in compassion.

The portal to the back of the ship slides open and Anakin gets inside. The portal closes, and the ship rolls away to the nearest landing platform, to blast off into space.
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Posted 06 May 2005 - 04:35 PM

Ext: Roon: Night

The ship lands on a small island, poking out from the stormy seas around. Lightning flashes in the distance, and the dark storm clouds above are menacing. Anakin looks out the window of the ship, looking out at the sea.

PILOT DROID - Would you like me to come and pick you back up?

ANAKIN - Yes. Come back here in 12 hours. Wait for me, and if I do not come, go ahead and leave.

PILOT DROID - I can do that, sir.

Anakin gets out and backs away, giving room for the ship to leave. When going up into the skies, the ship sways, barely able to get through the savage clouds of the storm.

The island around Anakin is small. There are rocks and crags, but no trees.

Anakin takes off his robes, stripping down to his under-shorts. He ties his belt around his waist. Anakin looks at the restless waters near the shore. Taking off at a run, he dives into the sea, going instantly 20 feet under. Lightning hits the surface of the water above, illuminating the underwater world. Anakin begins swimming forward, small bubbles coming from his mouth every few seconds.

A sea serpent of some type comes to Anakin, beginning to wrap around him. Anakin struggles, but the grip of the serpent grows tighter. Anakin stares at the thick neck of the serpent. By the power of the force, it's head is torn from it's body. Anakin wriggles through and swims forward once more.

Strange fish and humanoid mermen swim past, paying no mind to the Jedi.
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Posted 06 May 2005 - 04:42 PM

Ext: Roon: Night

Anakin breaks the surface of the water, breathing in fresh air. Raindrops begin to fall, the wind blowing it in sheets over the sea.

Another island is in view. Anakin swims to it's shores, and sits against a rock, the rain pouring over him.
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