The Lord of London second in the London Nights Trilogy
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Posted 18 January 2005 - 06:20 PM
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Posted 27 January 2005 - 11:14 PM
Chapter 5
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#18
Posted 28 January 2005 - 02:01 AM
And the ending of the chapter was very strong. We have a very important piece of drama and suspense exactly where it was needed. It couldn't have been better timed.
Oh, and I can't say I feel sorry for Boudicca either.
Good work, mate.
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Posted 28 January 2005 - 03:03 AM
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Posted 04 February 2005 - 01:42 AM
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Posted 04 February 2005 - 10:48 AM
So if your goal with this novel is to see if it can stand alone, I think you've succeeded in that.
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Posted 05 February 2005 - 12:38 AM
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Posted 05 February 2005 - 01:38 AM
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Posted 09 February 2005 - 10:47 PM
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#28
Posted 11 February 2005 - 12:33 AM
It wasn't just that the fight was exciting but the build-up you created before it began was very tense. You set up a big climactic scene here and it delivered in no small way.
Very well done. Bring on the finale!
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Posted 11 February 2005 - 12:55 AM
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