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Episode VIII - Civilian Takes Command

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Posted 01 October 2004 - 07:47 AM

JAYMG - thanks for the links!!!!!!! Great idea to have them all in one place! I will try to print them out when I have a quiet moment.

In the meantime, have a nice weekend, all of you. My computer at home has something wrong with the system (bloody XP) and until it is fixed, I can only watch the forum on weekdays.
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Posted 01 October 2004 - 08:02 AM

Ah yes, XP... I know its problems all too well. You have a great weekend too, Madam. smile.gif
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Posted 01 October 2004 - 08:31 AM

Well for me the weekend if over! smile.gif But don't let that ruin yours. I'm just a college student with enough free time for everything... if you don't count my continous assignments and tests 'work'. biggrin.gif

And JYAMG, it seems that my story is taking up a little more time than I thought... I'm trying to make the aerial battle scene brief, yet intense. But I've never done an aerial battle before so it could be problematic for me...
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Posted 01 October 2004 - 09:17 AM

You'll get there, mate. Trust me.
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Posted 01 October 2004 - 09:34 AM

You're right, I'll make it. I realized that I needed to make the aerial battle longer because... no, I can't tell you -- that'll spoil the story!! tongue.gif
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Posted 01 October 2004 - 10:04 AM

Well, we wouldn't want that, would we? cool.gif
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Posted 01 October 2004 - 11:19 PM

LOL! This is great stuff! BTW thanks for putting me in there! I know putting a jar jar picture must have been repulsive regardless if it has a big x on it or not! smile.gif
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Posted 02 October 2004 - 07:54 AM

On the contrary, I really wanted some way of including you ... and I just HAD TO have your avatar in there somewhere. What better way than using at as the flag of the prequel haters?
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Posted 04 October 2004 - 04:15 AM

The story chapter should have been done by now, but my writing has slowed down. Also, I decided to write the WHOLE story before posting the chapters... that'll take a couple of months to do.

Is that OK with you, JYAMG?
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Posted 04 October 2004 - 05:56 AM

That's fine. Let me know when you're done and I'll take a look at it.
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Posted 04 October 2004 - 08:51 AM

Then again, maybe I should just post them chapter by chapter.., gee, I'm sure chaning my mind a lot, aren't I? biggrin.gif

Anyway, I'll make sure I put a good deal of proofreading and refining into it... I'm not going to put in a beta version like I did last time. The aerial battle is half way done (I think I should have put in a little more, though) now I'll be getting to the part where you and the other main characters get shot down and have to escape! smile.gif
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Posted 05 October 2004 - 12:25 AM

Well, I have to admit that printing didn't go all that well. My printer spew out 53 pages, most of them blank. And those who included the pictures were truncated from the right. But I got most of it.

Palagin - where and when will you be posting yor story? I hate to miss it.
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Posted 05 October 2004 - 12:34 AM

Sorry to hear the printing caused so much of a hassle. Maybe someone else with more expertise may know what to do.
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Posted 05 October 2004 - 01:36 AM

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Palagin - where and when will you be posting yor story? I hate to miss it.


I should finish writing it either today or tomorrow, but after that, I have do some polishing off and proofreading... so look forward to either Thursday, Friday or Saturday.
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Posted 05 October 2004 - 04:11 AM

Great... um, any new reviews? How about Barend or Jordan? What did you think?

Chefelf?

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anybody?
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