Version two is done: I added some folds and included an eye hole, so it defiantely looks more mask like now. Hopefully there's aren't many more revisions, as the papers is starting to fray as a result of all the erasing (The lower part of his face on the left side of the image for instance)
...where the hell is my hat?...
Anyways, enjoy, and tell me what you think.
Make sure it's not on the bed. Putting your hat on your bed is summoning bad luck.
I like the expression on his face, he looks kinda like someone just said something very odd. I'd say more winkles around the nose and mouth area (it's supposed to hang from the end of the nose a bit and that'd cause distortion in that area.
I agree with Uszi about the face shape though: you gave him almost a round face and a very strong jawline. I imagine the cheeks a bit more sunken, with one of those Sherlock Holmesian long faces. His greatest weapon is his wits, not his fists, so he shouldn't look like a brawler.
And the tie is still wobbly. But overall this is a big improvement. You've got talent, Van Integral!